Portraits Day 16: Bella
by socalsteve

Comment by Retroesque:
Honestly this image does miss the mark. My first thought is the roughness around the pubic area - it needs to be healed.

The underwear is confusing. Nice colour but they look a bit like they were too large for her and have been pulled up to high and then folded over. I think her belly button should have been totally visable.

Her hair appears to be a wig and not very natural. It doesn't fall softely around her face and therefore adds to harshness.

P&S Day 18: Day at the Pool
by socalsteve

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Priceless!! Andher swimsuit fits better than your last models! :P
Really, Steve, this is fantastic! Stay cool! :)

Portraits Day 17: Raven
by socalsteve

Comment by Art Roflmao:
I looked at this before anyone else commented, but did not want to be the first to say what the others ended up saying. Back to the drawing board. :)

Portraits Day 17: Raven
by socalsteve

Comment by photokariangel:
her mouth should have either been closed, or meaningfully opened, beceause at this point, it just looks uncomfortable. I do like the pattern on her bikini, but the fit of it isnt that great, i.e. her boobs are falling out and its scrunching in her buttcheeks. beautiful girl, try some different poses though

Portraits Day 16: Bella
by socalsteve

Comment by photokariangel:
I agree with roz, like em' dressed!
But, the panties are just wierd, her expression is just..odd, and her hair looks matted and/or wigged. Cant win em' all, a man once said.

Portraits Day 17: Raven
by socalsteve

Comment by Kelli:
I think you need better lighting/focus on the face. The focus seems to be on her butt (unless that's what you were going for, lol). I think if you do her again, try a pose that plays up that tattoo on the back.

Portraits Day 17: Raven
by socalsteve

Comment by patio127:
That has to be the most unflattering bikini I have ever seen!!! Aside from that , Steve, a very cute model in a nice pose, altho the shadow on the inner thigh is distracting .

Portraits Day 17: Raven
by socalsteve

Comment by jhess77:
Not a huge fan of the pose or lighting in this one. Try turning her towards the camera more with a little more dramatic lighting. It would give the image a bit more emotion.
cheers,
JKH

Portraits Day 15: Naomi BC (High Contrast)
by socalsteve

Comment by ShutterPug:
I like this one best too - it really gives that old magazine cover feel

Portraits Day 14: Cadence
by socalsteve

Comment by ShutterPug:
While I like b/w portraits, I really like this color version best. Nice composition and details.