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05/19/2008 06:15:28 AM |
Not sure of your models level of exprience, but the stance seems contrived. Her face isn't relaxed, she looks a little 'mid expression'.
Again with the lighting, I think too harsh. Perhaps soften it somewhat? |
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05/18/2008 11:00:57 PM |
| I looked at this before anyone else commented, but did not want to be the first to say what the others ended up saying. Back to the drawing board. :) |
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05/18/2008 10:34:17 PM |
| her mouth should have either been closed, or meaningfully opened, beceause at this point, it just looks uncomfortable. I do like the pattern on her bikini, but the fit of it isnt that great, i.e. her boobs are falling out and its scrunching in her buttcheeks. beautiful girl, try some different poses though |
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05/18/2008 07:09:59 PM |
| I think you need better lighting/focus on the face. The focus seems to be on her butt (unless that's what you were going for, lol). I think if you do her again, try a pose that plays up that tattoo on the back. |
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05/18/2008 05:55:25 PM |
| That has to be the most unflattering bikini I have ever seen!!! Aside from that , Steve, a very cute model in a nice pose, altho the shadow on the inner thigh is distracting . |
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05/18/2008 01:45:02 PM |
Not a huge fan of the pose or lighting in this one. Try turning her towards the camera more with a little more dramatic lighting. It would give the image a bit more emotion.
cheers,
JKH |
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