The Mask I Must Wearby
LadyKComment by Tez: okie doke... comments commencing.
First thing I notice is how you missed some of the paint in the central line so your skin shows through. Also, if you'd smoothed the paint a bit out (or just used the spot healing brush) on the lumpy parts it would have made it look a lot more 'organic' I suppose.
Second thing I notice is the sort of yellowy tinge around your face. You could have fixed this easily but didn't, and I would have marked it down for this as it's a simple oversight. To fix this, there's a number of ways: carefully dodge the area at around 40% or so on a different layer and erase the parts of the face you blow out because of it; make a levels layer to lighten it; or hell, just use a white brush. Easy, but ignored.
Third thing that gets me is the red around the eyes. Maybe its very irritating paint but it isn't the best look. You could have fixed this in PS by changing the colour of the reds to something a bit nicer looking or by making them black/white in PS also, this could have been done by selectively desaturating it i guess (easiest way).
4- the eyes... they don't really stand out enough. You can see them, but they should always be the focal point of a portrait, and in this they're not impactive enough to really make me look twice at the picture. It's nice enough but the eyes are the key and usually deserve special attention.
On a sidenote i'm not too sure why you went with this pose, it kind of diminishes the effect of having 2 seperate sides to the face. I'm sure you had your reasons but I would have just gone for a full frontal face look, possibly with the head down a bit, eyes looking up to accentuate the eyes (and done what I suggested before), and then probs boosted the ocntrast to make it look a bit more lively and give it a bit of a kick up the arse.
I would have given this a 4, or maybe a 5, not because it's a bad picture but because the potential was seemingly ignored and could have been rectified with more thought and self-critique... not to say it ignored, but i'm a cynical bastard.
Sorry if that came across as harsh and dismissive but thats what I think and thought you would prefer something honest and possibly cutting to the usual "wow, nice job" stuff that is nice, but doesnt help.