Whoops! Missed the first time
by sekarmalathy

Comment by bvy:
Too silly! Well done.

Whoops! Missed the first time
by sekarmalathy

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Love the expression!

Whoops! Missed the first time
by sekarmalathy

Comment by nutzito:

I think that not including (in the title) the number of the image you are trying to remake was a mistake that you will make you lose some tenths of points.
It does meet the challenge, execution is ok , but still does not grab my attention.

Whoops! Missed the first time
by sekarmalathy

Comment by Bear_Music:
Took some courage to do this one, since it was one of the top scorers in the original Brown Ribbon Deja Vu challenge :-)

You have, of course, vastly improved on the original, no question about that. This is nicely lit and processed. I do wish you'd actually scrounged up a real arrow, I keep getting hung up on the sheer impossibility of arching with an unfletched skewer... :-)

All in all, a good, better-than-workmanlike rehashing of the brown, and a 7 from me for now.

Whoops! Missed the first time
by sekarmalathy

Comment by ikopanas:
You should clone out that apple. Great shot and expression. 9

Whoops! Missed the first time
by sekarmalathy

Comment by beckydi:
Too much empty space near the top. Could be cropped in a bit on the sides as well.

Whoops! Missed the first time
by sekarmalathy

Comment by Lydia:
The bottom seems crowded with so much space above the apple. Perhaps cropping a bit off the top would help. Other than that, I like this very much... oh... well... I'd like to have seen the apple stem, too. But, other than those two things... *grin*... it's very well done. Nice catchlights in the eyes and I like the look of concentration.

Gallop over the Capitol
by sekarmalathy

Comment by rlewis:
Could you tell me where this statue is located? I have seen a similar image before and would like to capture something like this the next time I am up that way. Good color, I like night shots...not sure about this type processing

Peaceful Place
by sekarmalathy

Comment by david1707:
I don't care for the red cast in this. I would have set the WB a bit differently. I really like your composition and it fits the challenge nicely.

Gallop over the Capitol
by sekarmalathy

Comment by sulamk:
appears veryoversaturated and cropped to tight