The Old Barn
by Maver

Comment by bvy:
That old barn feels even more feeble in that it seems to be delicately balanced on the crack/shadow in the road. A smart compositional touch. Excellent.

The Old Barn
by Maver

Comment by Revecca:
The horizon seems to be a bit tilted.. just slightly..
The image is superb though, very moody and I really like the textures and the leading line.

The Old Barn
by Maver

Comment by grahamgator:
Great sky and I like the bw; the crack in the pavement adds an interesting element. (voted earlier)

From The Chips Perspective!
by Maver

Comment by Maver:
Sarah,

Thank you very much for the Critique and positive comment! I agree with the deeper DOF, I had noticed that after I had posted the emphasis on the "Crisps" was a little left out. Thank you again!

Colour In the sky
by Maver

Comment by lisaglenn9:
This one is pretty good! well done

Colour In the sky
by Maver

Comment by tanguera:
I just LOVE the exuberant jubilation over a nearly deserted scene. As though the force of life cannot be contained.

Colour In the sky
by Maver

Comment by jbirkman:
Nice context with the traffic in the frame. Nice colors.

Colour In the sky
by Maver

Comment by hiriam:
very nice image - 9

Colour In the sky
by Maver

Comment by obscurity:
That's nice and low for some foreground stuff.

From The Chips Perspective!
by Maver

Comment by salmiakki:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Let me congratulate you first on getting in the top ten with this image well done.

Difficult to critique this from my perspective as I found this challenge topic to be very unappealing. However, just because I didn't like the topic, doesn't mean I can't find something to comment.

You obviously spent some time thinking about this and setting it up. It's a clever idea and clearly worked with the voters. I may have preferred a slightly deeper depth of field so that more of the crisps (I'm British, these are crisps, not chips!) are sharper. I can only imagine that given the set up, this would be quite difficult to achieve.

Overall, I'd say this was pretty well done and resonated with the voters.

Sarah