This Is My City
by heavyj

Comment by william88:
Your city is beautiful. Great shot! 10

The Shoutengai
by heavyj

Comment by pheonix676:
Cool shot

Envious EyEs
by heavyj

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, I think this shot would benefit from a slightly different crop. If there were more space on the right for her to "look" into, and less empty space on the left. I think this would give the shot more of a balanced feeling.

Technically, it is a good capture. There is some noise visible in the darker areas, and overall this hurts your clarity, etc.

Overall, it is a good portrait. Without the title, frankly, I would be lost as to which "sin" is was representing. This may have hurt with other voters. It is a good candid, and would probably make a good bw as well.

Karma

The Shoutengai
by heavyj

Comment by Melethia:
Lots of energy in this shot!

Penciled In
by heavyj

Comment by jeger:
I like the look of this image. Great shot!

The Shoutengai
by heavyj

Comment by MG:
It’s difficult to say if picture requires straightening – or is it the grading. Like what you did here with motion.

A Samurai's Tale
by heavyj

Comment by colorcarnival:
Don't know why it scored the way it did. I gave it a 7. My fave part was the lighting. Maybe the setup in the background took away from the supposed outdoor scene?

The Shoutengai
by heavyj

Comment by ryan_li64:
Nice timed exposure. Nice light and POV.
i like Japan too...

Penciled In
by heavyj

Comment by CorySmith:
wonder how many people are going to suspect this image for editing violations. who cares though, this is too original
9

Penciled In
by heavyj

Comment by dahkota:
love the editing in this - 8