Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by JuliBoc:
DNMC. "capture an interesting photo of a person using their cellular phone."

Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by bimble:
This is going to sound petty, so I apologise.
I do like the picture, and the idea behind it. But I *hate* the title.

Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by pamelasue:
IMHO, this doesn't meet the challenge ... missing the person

Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by glad2badad:
Cute idea, but where's the person?

Silver Rings with Devil Hairline Shaddows
by Someamateur

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club

You've tried to make what is a very dull subject interesting with the use of light. This is good. The shadows do add interest to the image. Three is a good number of objects to include too!

Composition: Not much to say except that it feels a little tight at the top. Was this intentional? Some comments on your photo may help with these critiques.

Technical: The lighting is a bit harsh, especially in the reflections. Again, I can't tell if this is intentional as you have no comments on the image.

Feel: It's not the most exciting topic and you've somewhat added interest but the base topic just that interesting to get the score much higher.

PM me if you have any questions.

Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by Lonz:
I am part of the DNMC Police - you need a person using their phone! Wagggh! heheh.... j/k - mine didnt either and I bet you have like 10 comments like that.

Blooming Rose
by Someamateur

Comment by Kronus:
I find this very soft as well

Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by oldbimmercoupe:
ok concept

Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by Jammur:
This week capture an interesting photo of a person using their cellular phone

Analogue Mobiletrap
by Someamateur

Comment by KarenNfld:
The challenge says:
This week capture an interesting photo of a person using their cellular phone.

Hate to be picky but I don't see a person.