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Challenge: Cell Phone Mania (Basic Editing)
Camera: Pentax *ist DL
Lens: Sigma 18-50mm f/3.5-5.6 DC for Sigma
Location: Mount Barker, South Australia
Date: Mar 20, 2007
Aperture: 22.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 2 Secs
Galleries: Abstract, Science and Technology
Date Uploaded: Mar 20, 2007

 This shoot was a lot of fun. I used a fill flash to get rid of some of the more dark shaddows. There were a lot of other shots to get this close to what I thought is pretty good.

Statistics
Place: 85 out of 118
Avg (all users): 5.0312
Avg (commenters): 3.8333
Avg (participants): 4.9020
Avg (non-participants): 5.0694
Views since voting: 843
Views during voting: 356
Votes: 224
Comments: 13
Favorites: 0

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 04/02/2007 04:17:16 PM
*Critique Club*

FIRST IMPRESSION: The lighting on this seems rather flat. I think the use of a flash was not in the best interest of the image. Sometimes a little bit of shadowing tends to give the image a more 3 dimentional feeling.

CHALLENGE: You have met the cell phone part of the challenge, but as most of your commenters pointed out, you are missing a person.

TECHNICAL: I guess this just seems too flat to spark much interest from most of the voters.

CONCLUSION: A very cute idea, but the execution leaves a little to be desired. We have all posted challenge entries like this. Please take this as a learning tool, and get back in there and enter again and again.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges!


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/27/2007 07:43:59 PM
DNMC. "capture an interesting photo of a person using their cellular phone."
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 03/24/2007 02:03:56 AM
This is going to sound petty, so I apologise.
I do like the picture, and the idea behind it. But I *hate* the title.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 03/23/2007 03:19:45 PM
IMHO, this doesn't meet the challenge ... missing the person
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 03/22/2007 03:28:36 PM
Cute idea, but where's the person?
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 03/21/2007 09:38:34 PM
I am part of the DNMC Police - you need a person using their phone! Wagggh! heheh.... j/k - mine didnt either and I bet you have like 10 comments like that.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 03/21/2007 05:31:59 PM
ok concept
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 03/21/2007 11:12:11 AM
This week capture an interesting photo of a person using their cellular phone
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 03/21/2007 08:44:27 AM
The challenge says:
This week capture an interesting photo of a person using their cellular phone.

Hate to be picky but I don't see a person.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 03/21/2007 04:21:09 AM
dnmc
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 03/21/2007 03:06:56 AM
nice shot but unfortunately IMO DNMC as it called for a person using their cell phone
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 03/21/2007 02:20:55 AM
Not really fitting the intent of the challenge in my opinion.
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 03/21/2007 01:36:34 AM
DNMC: "This week capture an interesting photo of a person using their cellular phone." Where is the person?
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