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03/22/2007 02:35:13 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
You've tried to make what is a very dull subject interesting with the use of light. This is good. The shadows do add interest to the image. Three is a good number of objects to include too!
Composition: Not much to say except that it feels a little tight at the top. Was this intentional? Some comments on your photo may help with these critiques.
Technical: The lighting is a bit harsh, especially in the reflections. Again, I can't tell if this is intentional as you have no comments on the image.
Feel: It's not the most exciting topic and you've somewhat added interest but the base topic just that interesting to get the score much higher.
PM me if you have any questions. |
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03/14/2007 11:33:37 PM |
| I like the composition here. The brightness of the highlight is a bit much for me. I think the title is a bit wordy, but that doesn't affect your score. |
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03/14/2007 09:16:23 PM |
| A bit too symmetrical, lacking interest to me. |
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03/14/2007 06:42:40 AM |
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03/12/2007 04:54:31 PM |
| The shadows are kinda nifty! I wonder if this would have worked on a very mirrored surface, too? Definitely meets the challenge but may be a bit plain for a high vote at DPC. |
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