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Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club:

Let me start off by congratulating you on your first 6+ score. Way to go!!! Now for the reason I̢۪m here, critique your Rule of Thirds entry. This is one of those images where the technicals are pretty solid except for the lighting being a little harsh on the models chest. The hair does convey the motion indicated by your title nicely; however, the models facial expression doesn̢۪t look comfortable. Then there is negative space on the left side of the image. This is one of those things where some people will love it and some won̢۪t. I think you could have removed most of it and kept the model̢۪s eyes in the rule of thirds node very easily. Would that have improved your score? If so, not by much. You have a very strong entry here, as shown by the score you received. I can see you will be a force to be recognized in future challenges. Congratulations.

Please let me know if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim

Message edited by author 2007-05-05 16:48:04.

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Comment by photobuddy:
this is a very simple shot...but it caught my eye...9

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Comment by LalliSig:
Pretty nice shot, still, something about the lack of hands in the frame bothers me. Gave a 6.

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Comment by cutout:
7

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Comment by mpeters:
Nicely done. Pleasant lighting and exposure control. Very non-static portrait.

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Comment by Shrink:
would prefer to see the 1/3rd lines intersect on her face also,and not jusyt on her left breast. beautiful model!.

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Comment by Spizzer:
Nice shot, but I would like to see her eyes at the thirds intersection.

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Comment by Charlene:
I wish her arms weren't cut off. It stops the movement, for me.

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Comment by markopella:
lighting is a little harsh, washes out the subject. Nice movement, composition. 7.

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Comment by scmaxfield:
Nice image... Love the subtle/natural coloring. Only critique would be maybe the light on her chest is a little hot... Tough one.