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05/05/2007 04:41:04 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club:
Let me start off by congratulating you on your first 6+ score. Way to go!!! Now for the reason I’m here, critique your Rule of Thirds entry. This is one of those images where the technicals are pretty solid except for the lighting being a little harsh on the models chest. The hair does convey the motion indicated by your title nicely; however, the models facial expression doesn’t look comfortable. Then there is negative space on the left side of the image. This is one of those things where some people will love it and some won’t. I think you could have removed most of it and kept the model’s eyes in the rule of thirds node very easily. Would that have improved your score? If so, not by much. You have a very strong entry here, as shown by the score you received. I can see you will be a force to be recognized in future challenges. Congratulations.
Please let me know if you have any questions regarding this critique.
Tim
Message edited by author 2007-05-05 16:48:04. |
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05/01/2007 12:55:07 AM |
| this is a very simple shot...but it caught my eye...9 |
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04/30/2007 08:39:01 AM |
| Pretty nice shot, still, something about the lack of hands in the frame bothers me. Gave a 6. |
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04/30/2007 04:04:34 AM |
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04/27/2007 02:04:03 AM |
| Nicely done. Pleasant lighting and exposure control. Very non-static portrait. |
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04/27/2007 12:46:55 AM |
| would prefer to see the 1/3rd lines intersect on her face also,and not jusyt on her left breast. beautiful model!. |
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04/26/2007 01:57:11 PM |
| Nice shot, but I would like to see her eyes at the thirds intersection. |
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04/25/2007 10:28:40 PM |
| I wish her arms weren't cut off. It stops the movement, for me. |
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04/25/2007 08:27:34 PM |
| lighting is a little harsh, washes out the subject. Nice movement, composition. 7. |
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04/25/2007 07:31:10 PM |
| Nice image... Love the subtle/natural coloring. Only critique would be maybe the light on her chest is a little hot... Tough one. |
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04/25/2007 03:56:58 PM |
| one third full two thirds empty |
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04/25/2007 08:44:37 AM |
| stunning...without a doubt sheer perfection in every way...10 from me...congrats on the ribbon in advance! |
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04/25/2007 04:13:48 AM |
| very nice shot, good lighting, but not really following the rule of thirds |
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04/25/2007 12:21:30 AM |
| great shot! the "floating" hair really gives a sense of action. the colors and clarity are right on... also, really cute model! |
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