Dark & Lightby
ladpupmoeComment by SJCarter: * Greetings from the Critique Club *
First let me say that I remember this shot from the D&L Challenge and thought it was creative and good.
Composition:
Really nice use of the space. I like the diagonal corner-to-corner line you used - nice variation on the rule of thirds. I also appreciate the fact that not only are the light and dark areas contrasting, but the blue & yellow are as well.
Lighting:
Good, but perhaps a bit harsh. Some of the highlights, while aren't blown, are a bit bright. However, the contrasting light and dark areas compliment each other well.
Focus:
Good, but not quite tack sharp. The added texture of the underlying material is a nice touch though, and adds yet another layer of contrasting elements (smooth surface vs ribbed).
Overall:
A strong entry IMHO. I think the score probably suffered a bit because of the title - there were so many "Dark & Light" entries. I think that this particular image was underrated because of the varying levels of contrasts you presented.
I also looked through your Portfolio - you have some fantastic stuff! And 200+ challenges? Wow.
Just my 2 cents... Very nice work.
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