I'm watching you!
by Beetle

Comment by bhowie:
Well focused and the eyes are very appealling. I would suggest a tighter crop on the right, but I know that may be intentional given the challange. I also find the out of focus elements on the left off-putting - perhaps because they are right in the zone for thirds. Overall a solid entry.

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by p3wiz:
the starbust is a nice touch, good job.

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by neophyte:
great colors and very crisp. great tag lines but the comp is lacking. My eyes have to work to take in the ad. Remember " Less is more"

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by train:
nice display and well thought out well done
Lucky Mum!

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by RKT:
To me it seems the picture was taken to frame the text, i think this may have worked better without the generic looking text.

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by Brad:
A little bit "busy" in the composition overall in my opinion.
A different font and perhaps something less in the way of text like:
"Dazzle her this Mother's Day with our Summer Dreams Collection" may have faired better.

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by singsunshine:
Interesting lay out.good job.

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by pcody:
So far this is one of the best. The composition, clarity, concept and lighting are good. The only thing I can see that bothers me is the cut off stone by the necklace. It seems like it should have been either in or out of the picture. Just as a fyi. When you work with sand, take a paintbrush to feather around where you worked.

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by Di:
Composition: excellent - well balanced
Lighting: the flares on the necklace and crab to my eye seem to be off slightly from where they micht be actually
Color: very good, would like to see better definition between the silver and pink
Clarity: very good - as jewelry is a lot different texture than the natural elements, it looks slightly out of focus.
Lettering: average - I would have liked to see a different font used

Summer Dreams
by Beetle

Comment by Steveinnz:
Nice layout. I think it would possibly work better with the jewels taking up twice the space they are at present. Would make a great advert. 7