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| 02/28/2007 01:21:53 PM |
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| 02/28/2007 12:08:28 PM |
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| 02/28/2007 12:00:34 PM |
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| 02/27/2007 02:23:19 PM |
Shellaby BeckyTComment by BeckyT: Originally posted by Greetmir: I think this is a gorgeous shot but the branch and leaves are WAY too distracting from the subject IMO.
If I may be so bold ... what about cropping out EVERYTHING right of the top of her forehead (excluding the leaves) ???
Try it ... I think you will like it ... |
I will definately try your suggestion. When I get it complete I will notify you to see if I successfully improved the shot. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Message edited by author 2007-02-27 14:23:56. |
| 02/27/2007 01:27:26 PM |
Shellaby BeckyTComment by Greetmir: I think this is a gorgeous shot but the branch and leaves are WAY too distracting from the subject IMO.
If I may be so bold ... what about cropping out EVERYTHING right of the top of her forehead (excluding the leaves) ???
Try it ... I think you will like it ...
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| 02/23/2007 11:59:42 AM |
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| 02/07/2007 06:34:04 AM |
Marblesby BeckyTComment by BeckyT: Thank you pccjrose for your comments. That is exactly what I needed know. I was very happy with this shot and was taken a back by the score. I see what your are talking about though. Thank you. |
| 02/07/2007 06:29:42 AM |
Marblesby BeckyTComment by bassbone: Here are a few thoughts about your image (by the way I gave it a 5 during the challenge - Not a bad image at all, just not a great image that says wow or tells me a story).
First of all, the image is rather static - the main subject is in the center of the image.
Second, the lighting is not very dramatic - the background is dark and the marbles seem to get lost in it. I would imagine this would have worked much better to show the colors on the marbles (mostly dark blues and reds, etc) on a bright background with bright lighting.
I do think you did a nice job of conveying shallow DOF - the focus on the marble in front is pretty good, but the darkness makes it hard to tell on quick glance
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| 01/31/2007 10:27:06 PM |
Marblesby BeckyTComment by cpanaioti: Though the detail in the marbles lends well to shallow DOF, the main marble seems a bit too central with the blank forground not adding much to the image. Bringing the marble formation down in the frame and adding a bit more light to the foremost marble I think would help a lot. |
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| 01/31/2007 08:06:37 AM |
Marblesby BeckyTComment by robinssong: Nice DOF!! :) That's what this challenge is all about and this photo is a great example! Nice that you have the primary colors up front and middle and the assortment of colors in the blurred area. Nice arrangement and focus. Love the warm wood with the crack leading to the marbles. Very pleasing and natural. Hope this does well. Message edited by author 2007-02-07 12:06:05. |
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