The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by peroty:
Damn right!

The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by inutza:
I think the photo was better if there was a hand on the frill. I like the idea.

Close Call
by EssAreDubya

Comment by talj:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Composition:

I like the position of the in focus piece of glass in the frame and the choice of colours are good but the rest of the image looks very busy. As one of your commenters mentions the blue at the bottom center ir also very distracting.

Technicals:

I think the focus on the small squares of glass is good but the different colours and shapes in the rest of the shot become distracting due to their out of focus look. The lighting looks fairly good on the in focus glass.

My personal thought:

The challenge description said the subject should not easily be identificable at first glance. The thing I struggle with with this shot is had I not read your description I would still not know what I was looking at and I think maybe voters were looking to at least be able to make out the subject after one or two glances.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by neophyte:
Nice concept for a complete advertising campaign. Comp would work better with a tighter crop to display product more Prominently. The interior of the car is a bit dark. Nice job overall, very creative.

The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by klstover:
I like the idea and the colors and contrast are great. I think your composition could be improved though. It doesn't seem like the coke can is the focal point of the image.

The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by glad2badad:
I like this image and I love the message. It does seem that the coke can isn't quite as sharp as the steering wheel - could be condensation on the can making it look soft? Anyway, nice job overall. Good luck in the challenge.

The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by PapaBob:
I love the idea and the color and focus are great, not sure I like the can placement on the steering wheel but still a nice image. 6

The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by swankFoto:
does not work.
feels like you wanted to show us you have an Audi.

Slip Me A Mickey
by EssAreDubya

Comment by noraneko:
Shadows behind Mickey are a little distracting, but the concept is amusing

The official soft drink of the designated driver
by EssAreDubya

Comment by Sunshyne:
Great job!