Laundry time
by Rino63

Comment by grahamgator:
Clever :)

Femmina
by Rino63

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that this has a great style to it.

Technically this is good. The lighting is good, composition is great, DOF is used well.

Artistically I have to agree with many of the commenter's that the nail polish bottle is more of a distraction than an asset here. If it weren't in the frame then we'd have a great line being formed with the legs and the shoes but we now have an "L" shape for our eyes to follow. The shot tells a great story, or at least it let's our minds create a story and that's what you want from a shot, something that engages the viewer.

In summary a great shot that has potential to be even better.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

Femmina
by Rino63

Comment by David Ey:
the polish adds a nice touch

Dance in the sun
by Rino63

Comment by Crafty:
I like this image good luck

Dance in the sun
by Rino63

Comment by Catherine_B:
Love the waves in the background, and black and white really works well here.

Dance in the sun
by Rino63

Comment by herfotoman:
Probably not going to score well, but I like it.

San Lorenzo Maggiore
by Rino63

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

First off, I really like the "expansive" feeling of this shot.

Compositionally, you have done will with the symmetry. Also, the man on the left really adds to the shot, I think, by giving the shot some "scale," but also some "human-ness." Without him, the shot would be just another of a huge monolithic, impersonal structure.

Technically, I like the subdued colors in this. In the upper part, though, it is a bit noisy/grainy, perhaps from post processing. While the grain, per se, doesn't bother me, and perhaps adds to the shot in some ways, across the top of the arch is colored artifacts, and that just seems to detract some.

Overall, very well done, and I'm surprised it didn't score a bit higher.

Karma

Femmina
by Rino63

Comment by Luci11e:
DADGUM!!!! GREAT SHOT!!!!! If I were voting this would be a 10!!! WOW!!!

Dance in the sun
by Rino63

Comment by SoulJance:
I get what you are trying to do but I think it would have helped if he was holding the brolly up higher and we could clearly see both arms.

Dance in the sun
by Rino63

Comment by JokersSoul:
Really beautiful.