putting it all on the line
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Comment by gyaban:
I usually am not fond of your images, but I really like this one. It makes me feel like an old toy in the attic, in a pleasant way.

blurdraggled
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Comment by ambaker:
CRITIQUE CLUB REVIEW

So, the task that has befallen me is to critique, of all people, the legendary Pothumous.

Considering your style, and well known skill, lets dispense with most of the technicals. You certainly do not need help with exposure and other basics.

What I see in this image: I like the trio trudging into the frame. However if there were less tilt to the frame, perhaps their effort would be more pronounced. I like the play of light and shadow. But the buildings are a little bit bright for me as they have lost detail, or if there had been a bit of softer focus, then the bright buildings could have worked a little better for my taste. I like the leading line of the hose. It draws my eye back in, when it tries to wander. I might consider cropping the partial building off the left. I don't fe l like it is really part of the story. As is, there is plenty of food for the imagination here. Very nice work.

the visitor
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Comment by tanguera:
Full of mystery and foreboding

cornography
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Comment by PennyStreet:
this stopped me in my tracks. not sure why I didn't comment then...

cornography
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Comment by tate:
hard pore corn.

Message edited by author 2015-12-08 09:47:32.

cornography
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Comment by cutout:
shit:) 9

putting it all on the line
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Comment by jagar:
Top notch, would have had a blue butt if I'd been expertly inclined. Great stuff.

putting it all on the line
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Comment by insteps:
I thought this was a jmritz. I voted this entire challenge because of your image. Beautifully done!

putting it all on the line
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Comment by Neat:
Wonderfully put together in my top two, already voted.

putting it all on the line
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Comment by jmritz:
sometimes we have to. a story that i hope ends well