The Wind Roseby
posthumousComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
I seem to "draw" your pictures a lot. I can't decide if it is fate, karmic retribution, or a conspiratorial re-education plan.
Compositionally, it is well balanced and the red umbrella does well to attract, and keep, the viewers attention.
Technically, it is well focused, lit, exposed and processed. It has a good level of contrast and the details are visible throughout.
What I like the best, though, and what I suspect may have put some people off is that the person is completely hidden from the viewer. I like that. It speaks of "everyman" and could be any one of us in that same situation. It also reminded me of my freshman year at Appalachian State where I actually attempted to carry an umbrella, only to have it blown inside out repeatedly (Upperclassmen just buy a big poncho to cover their backpack and what not).
I think it is a very well done shot, on several levels, and would have like to see it score higher. Great work, once again.
Karma