at play on a ship of dreams
by yeti

Comment by balancedfox:
The pic could have been improved with post processing to make the colours brighter. It seems quite drab and unexciting.

at play on a ship of dreams
by yeti

Comment by YourBuddyFlo:
The composition needs work

at play on a ship of dreams
by yeti

Comment by CONRAD:
LITTLE GIRL LOOKING WRONG DIRECTION.

watcher at the gate
by yeti

Comment by Claya:
Focus seems off.

watcher at the gate
by yeti

Comment by Artifacts:
This image is tough to judge. It does not have any overexposed areas but is in color and does not fit the classic mode of low-key imagery. It looks like there is some color noise in places that should be corrected. There is not a lot of strength to the composition and that will hurt it. Viewers may find the branch shadows to be distracting because they will not be able to discern why they were included in the composition. Though voters will understand the connection between the flag and border it appears that it is not uniform in width all the way around.

watcher at the gate
by yeti

Comment by bookworm:
could have been a little more in focus. good photo though

watcher at the gate
by yeti

Comment by pcody:
The composition is static. Looks like it was underexposed.

watcher at the gate
by yeti

Comment by mosall:
This photograph would be more powerful if the noise and color hue were not so distracting.

watcher at the gate
by yeti

Comment by BakerBug:
This would be a great shot if there wasn't so much noise.

'readin, 'writin, and 'rithamtic
by yeti

Comment by photojennic:
Good idea for a composition - the lighting is a little off and although true to life there is too much chaos. You might have cropped in to take out the paisley couch and tried indirect lighting - bounced of the walls or ceiling instead of direct flash - that would have added some depth and texture to the shot.