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GiorgioComment by hdogg4u: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
I have had the privilege of writing a critique on your photograph.
First Impression - the most important one:
Wow that is freakin sweet...there are some areas that could have made this just super sweet.
Composition:
I like the overall composition with the diagonal lines and all. In my opinion I would have only used one plane. In your composition I follow the first planes lines and end up moving on the second plane I think this photographs well if you can stay on one subject area.
Subject:
The subject here being the plane in the sky is just is just a tad soft on the plane maybe some selective sharpening on just the plane region.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
I could however tell that this was done using the same plane. Maybe just using one plane going across and working more on the sky to enhance the planes appearance this could also be done in post processing. The exposure looks pretty good, worked well for you here.
To grow its vote?:
Very tough to increase voting scores but I would say just some post processing or just thinking how the voters think could make some good changes.
Summary:
Overall very nice. Good photograph to learn from.
Keep up the good work.
Hiral Patel
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