Strawberry Cream Savers
by rj324

Comment by mbardeen:
Greets from the Critique Club!

Hi Ray,

Initial Impression:
Orangish, interesting patterns and textures.

Challenge:
It meets the challenge well.

Composition:
Sound, if just a bit uninspiring. I'm not really sure how it could be made better though..

Technical:
As I mentioned in my initial impressions, this is just a bit too orange. It diminishes the impact of the candy ever so slightly and makes it a bit unappetizing to me. I really like the lighting.. it's well done and shows off the texture of the candies nicely. Good Job!

Overall:
I like this photo, it shows off the candy in an appealing manner. Good job!

Branta canadensis (Linnaeus) - Canada Goose
by rj324

Comment by ChrisW123:
Should have included all of the reflection, but still excellent. Great title, describing the animal also. Amazing, you can even see the feet because the water is so calm. 8!

Branta canadensis (Linnaeus) - Canada Goose
by rj324

Comment by Journey:
Since the bird is the picture, i would have liked to be able to detect his eye more. Not sufficient light on his head, which also makes the white area near his head turn too grey. Also, would have cropped more off the top and given a bit more space at the bottom. His reflections barely makes it or barely does not. It feels a little cramped there. 6 Journey

Tulipta - Tulips Bloom
by rj324

Comment by e301:
Whilst this is a lovely shot, i'm looking in this challenge for more of a suggestion of environment.

Tulipta - Tulips Bloom
by rj324

Comment by kiwiness:
Great macro, the color combination is in harmony, a very good pic - 9.

Tulipta - Tulips Bloom
by rj324

Comment by mzanoni:
Great macro. These are hard to do for so many reasons (which is why I don't do them). But you've done an excellent job with this. Excellent detail and exposure.

Tulipta - Tulips Bloom
by rj324

Comment by tecent642:
looks like there will be a lot of maro shots of flowers. i like the color contrast - best one so far!!!!

Tulipta - Tulips Bloom
by rj324

Comment by Gallatin:
Very nice macro shot

Tulipta - Tulips Bloom
by rj324

Comment by SteveS:
Great colors

Tulipta - Tulips Bloom
by rj324

Comment by lionelm:
Sorry very nice .. but wrong week for me .. not flora.