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Strawberry Cream Savers
Strawberry Cream Savers
rj324


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Candy (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Home
Date: Apr 12, 2003
Aperture: 4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Still Life, Macro
Date Uploaded: Apr 12, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 20 out of 81
Avg (all users): 6.1270
Avg (commenters): 6.7222
Avg (participants): 5.9265
Avg (non-participants): 6.3621
Views since voting: 3631
Votes: 126
Comments: 19
Favorites: 1 (view)


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04/23/2003 04:50:38 AM
Greets from the Critique Club!

Hi Ray,

Initial Impression:
Orangish, interesting patterns and textures.

Challenge:
It meets the challenge well.

Composition:
Sound, if just a bit uninspiring. I'm not really sure how it could be made better though..

Technical:
As I mentioned in my initial impressions, this is just a bit too orange. It diminishes the impact of the candy ever so slightly and makes it a bit unappetizing to me. I really like the lighting.. it's well done and shows off the texture of the candies nicely. Good Job!

Overall:
I like this photo, it shows off the candy in an appealing manner. Good job!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/20/2003 04:57:33 AM
Your picture makes me want to reach into the puter and just grab it and eat it. This looks soooo good. Your lighting, composition and colours are just awesome. Very well done and GL in this weeks challenge.
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04/18/2003 05:51:39 AM
Lots of noise on the photo, otherwise, nice close-up.
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04/17/2003 10:16:05 PM
This extreme close up implies that this joyful pattern goes on for some time, yet it also gives us a glimpse of the individual. Engaging.
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04/17/2003 05:01:25 PM
Very nicely done. The glare is pretty soft. focus is very strong. Color seems pretty true. Cropping - personal choice. Overall, this is pretty good. 8 Rob the Swash
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04/17/2003 10:34:04 AM
Great focus and texture. One of my favorites.
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04/16/2003 11:03:57 PM
Very pretty colors and great job of focus.
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04/16/2003 09:05:40 PM
glarey. white balance needs less orange.
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04/15/2003 07:32:36 PM
Nicely detailed view of a favorite candy... good job!
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04/15/2003 01:53:38 PM
lovely, i can see the texture on the sweets, shame the light is is adding shine to the tops
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04/15/2003 12:21:05 PM
nice closeup and good work with the lighting :) - setzler
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04/15/2003 11:59:23 AM
Nice detail and composition. I like the lighting in this shot. Not too powerful, but strong enough for some nice highlights.
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04/15/2003 10:52:23 AM
very nicely done..sharp and well composed.
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04/15/2003 09:52:34 AM
The funny thing is that I am eating these exact sweets as I comment! That must be worth an extra point :-) Choice shot, very sharp and in focus. Nothing to criticize about it really. Awesome!
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04/15/2003 02:50:32 AM
Nice. 7
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04/14/2003 10:49:45 PM
Love the colors and swirls. Good composition - really close up and personal.
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04/14/2003 11:45:18 AM
Nice shooting.
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04/14/2003 05:09:33 AM
Good color and texture to this photo. The orange cream savers are better though but I'm sure have a little less visual impact as the strawberry ones. Nice job
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04/14/2003 02:31:43 AM
I like it, but the composition bugs me for some reason. I think I'd prefer a pattern shot to be more centered...but I'm not sure.
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