Geometricby
shamrockComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
The critique I am doing is for "Geometric"
First Impression - the most important one:
Neat shot .. like the glass .. not sure of the DOF.
Composition:
I like this set up ... it is very centred (but who really cares) ... the mirror effect of the glass is fantastic ... overall a very good photo.
Subject:
Now this does meet the subject ... shape in a toy ... I like it.
Technical (Colour and light):
Its the narrow depth of field that is the issue here. I think that this is a subject where the blurring of the DOF did not work. Really wanted something crisp. This appears to be an issue for a number of commentators.
To grow its vote?:
Wow this is hard .. that was a tough challenge ... I think look at the DOF .. and check and try cropping in different manners ... trying to look at thirds and leading lines for the eye.
Summary:
I think this is cool .. I commend your son on putting together the image. ... I commend you on a good photo ...
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari