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01/14/2006 02:52:16 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
The critique I am doing is for "Geometric"
First Impression - the most important one:
Neat shot .. like the glass .. not sure of the DOF.
Composition:
I like this set up ... it is very centred (but who really cares) ... the mirror effect of the glass is fantastic ... overall a very good photo.
Subject:
Now this does meet the subject ... shape in a toy ... I like it.
Technical (Colour and light):
Its the narrow depth of field that is the issue here. I think that this is a subject where the blurring of the DOF did not work. Really wanted something crisp. This appears to be an issue for a number of commentators.
To grow its vote?:
Wow this is hard .. that was a tough challenge ... I think look at the DOF .. and check and try cropping in different manners ... trying to look at thirds and leading lines for the eye.
Summary:
I think this is cool .. I commend your son on putting together the image. ... I commend you on a good photo ...
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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01/10/2006 09:35:08 AM |
| Great idea - I think it would have been a stronger photo with a deeper depth of field such that the everything was sharp. |
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01/08/2006 06:32:26 PM |
| More depth of field would have helped you. Otherwise, excellent. |
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01/07/2006 12:21:17 PM |
| greater DOF wouldrealy make this pop. Instead it gives the illusion of being OOF |
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01/07/2006 06:16:54 AM |
| Colorful shapes here..... |
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01/05/2006 02:49:00 PM |
| The entire object being in focus would have helped, I think. |
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01/05/2006 01:52:30 PM |
| nice powerfull colors. nice reflection you got going there. 7 |
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01/05/2006 08:23:11 AM |
| bigger DOF would have been better I think... my eyes seem to go round and round the shapes but struggling to find the bit in focus... |
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01/05/2006 01:13:24 AM |
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01/05/2006 12:10:50 AM |
| Nice DOF and colors, good composition! |
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01/04/2006 11:48:47 AM |
| i don't think the depth of field blur in the front helps the image |
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01/04/2006 11:44:51 AM |
Hey...nice magnets!!!!
Just curious how well your magnet shot is doing? Mine started off at 6.6 but is down to a 5.2
Your's has a lot of varying color. (Mine is the one with the red background) |
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01/04/2006 07:09:01 AM |
| Very creative. I think the bottom one could be in focus a little more but other than that well done! |
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01/04/2006 04:55:47 AM |
| Need better Focus and in front |
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01/04/2006 01:02:04 AM |
| great usage of some really cool toys!!! nice pic |
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