Désiré de Lilleby
hannekeComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Yeah .. it works .. but does it grab me .. what I am meant to focus on ... solid picture .. but I am a little confused.
Composition:
For the writing this is a lovely composition .. I love how you really used the frame of the window to contain the scene ... I am really curious as to what some of these people are doing ... drinking coffee .. dreaming of things better, writing stories .. observing life ...
Subject:
Works .. and meets the challenge well.
Technical (Colour and light):
The black and white really works well for this picture .. it also plays a total hand in creating the mood here.
To grow its vote?:
I get lost a little .. which means to me there is no single real WOW factor .. more of a curious drag me back slowly into the image. I like it .. but yeah .. am not sure of what part to look at.
Summary:
Great pic ... well done .. I like this and think it adds to your portfolio nicely.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari