Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by anz:
nice use of perspective-anz

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by goodtempo:
the blue tint doesn't look right for some reason. most of the picture is the floor and that part is not interesting with the blue tint all over it. maybe needs white balance to make it look right.

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by justine:
Look at the shine on that floor! Wow...marble? I would love to visit there sometime.
Pretty. Love the perspective you used. It's a well done shot. Justine

Un Allowed Area in Union Station, Los Angeles
by takethat

Comment by Brenna Kimi:
lonely works

Advocate for the Solidarity of Israel
by takethat

Comment by jimmsp:
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) - Very good. The subject is very relevant, and some version of this is always front-page news. The central figure certainly shows the emotion which is present with this subject. I like the slight blur on the hand � shows action and emotion.
(2) BACKGROUND � two things hit me, perhaps both out of your control. First, the sky is overly bright. Probably a cloudy day with high overcast. Second, the man and woman just left of the elbow are smiling. Bad form for an emotional rally. Perhaps a shot a minute later would have found them unsmiling. On the other hand, I like the cropping � gives a good feeling of a crowd.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL � Focus and DOF look very good to me . No recommended changes.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL � For the challenge, no recommended changes. For publishing, I�d try to darken the sky a tad.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO � When I first saw this photo, I thought � �front page�. It was made by the centered man who is yelling, and the subject.

Jim msp
Critique Club

Advocate for the Solidarity of Israel
by takethat

Comment by takethat:
Thanks to those of you who voted. This photo exhibited a lot of emotion. It is quite thrilling to attend a political exhibition as such. There are many different humanistic and atmospheric emotions that one can capture at such an event. I plan to continue and suggest ya�ll to try it as well if you haven�t already.

Advocate for the Solidarity of Israel
by takethat

Comment by KarenB:
Great catch. The exposure seems a little off to me - sky and sign blend together, yet there is a bit of blue sky in the upper right corner.

Advocate for the Solidarity of Israel
by takethat

Comment by Jacko:
Very photo journalistic :) I like it. Really conveys the emotions strongly. Jacko. 9

Advocate for the Solidarity of Israel
by takethat

Comment by ganders:
Nicely captures the emtions of the central figure seemingly shouting right into the camera. All the crowd seem to be converging on him too although it seems slightly out of place to have this angry central character and at least two smiling faces immediately to his right!

Advocate for the Solidarity of Israel
by takethat

Comment by Marklane:
Good piece of photojournalism!