Phrases ot the world
by mykoleary

Comment by caba:
This looks like the floor of the new Seattle Library, I thought of that, but didn't make it down there. I would have gotten closer to the floor to show more texture and maybe avoided the harsh glare. Good idea for this challenge.

Phrases ot the world
by mykoleary

Comment by whiteroom:
i like this

Reaching Arches
by mykoleary

Comment by graphicfunk:
Very nice image

Dual wheel drive
by mykoleary

Comment by rananculus:
greetings from the critique club !!

What this picture lacks for me is composition. It is a little blocky and square, and with such strong verticle lines, I think that you could benefit from a tighter crop. I am in agreement with the comment that the sky trailing all the way down the right side is a distraction, and I think the small patch of sky to the lower left could be cropped out as well.

Good detail and color. You certainly selected a great subject. If this were mine I would play with a bunch of different crops. I think I see several nice images in the photograph.

Dual wheel drive
by mykoleary

Comment by shadow:
the framing is not very interesting. should have focused on the large valve on the left instead.

Dual wheel drive
by mykoleary

Comment by Ambo:
Well done...A good strong crisp image

Dual wheel drive
by mykoleary

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 8
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 9
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 7
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 8.50 Dick

Dual wheel drive
by mykoleary

Comment by FrostyPaws:
pretty good guy picture.

Dual wheel drive
by mykoleary

Comment by fulcrum:
Great exposure! The color of the sky works well with the rust color. The already strong composition could be made stronger still by cropping the right side just a little, to prevent the sky from going to the bottom edge. Try cropping it just to the left of where the right side of the pipe begins to curve. It helps the balance and keeps the curve of the pipe from overcoming the strong linear composition.

Dual wheel drive
by mykoleary

Comment by whagerbaumer:
Just a little underexposed as far as I am concerned, but excellent artistry in composition.

An 8.