Yellow Submarine
by neophyte

Comment by BlackNewfs:
Cool subject, I like the shot--I wish there wasn't the bright yellow border around the picture though, I found it distracting. Would have been fine without a border, or even with a charcoal one.

Yellow Submarine
by neophyte

Comment by Falc:
Nice 'record' shot. Needs some more zazz, a more exciting angle, better lighting, some mood, some expression of the adventure.

Yellow Submarine
by neophyte

Comment by Art Roflmao:
I'll give you half credit. ;-)

Yellow Submarine
by neophyte

Comment by Jutilda:
How in the hell did you find that?????

Football Shaped
by neophyte

Comment by robdoc:
needs perspective correction

Football Shaped
by neophyte

Comment by BrianR:
good use of the Arhitecture....8

Football Shaped
by neophyte

Comment by JunieMoon:
Looks like Constitution Plaze, Phoenix building. Must be Scalvert.

Sofia Huntingdog
by neophyte

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Dogs are so bloody difficult to shoot ... well done.

Composition:
This is very frame centred .... and I do miss the paws .. sorry to repeat whatyou have already heard.

Subject:
Meets the challenge ... and is in her environment .. what is funny is how many of the comments you received that found just that very distracting.

Technical (Colour and light):
Is well lit naturally ... it seems slightly oversharpened to me ...

To grow its vote?:
I don't know that animals did well in this challenge ... it seems that voters till wanted a person in the shot ... if you had Ed the hunter there as well I think it may have done better.

Summary:
is a lovely shot .. good work.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Skeptic
by neophyte

Comment by overclover:
bruce willis is a photography nut too? LMAO sorry but thats who you're reminding me of hope thats not offensive. Love the lighting the expression and the conversion to B&W

Skeptic
by neophyte

Comment by Transit:
Oh! someone has pissed you off. Great photo.