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| 04/03/2003 10:00:27 PM |
Married for 68 yearsby RefocusedComment by KarenB: Critique Club Assignment:
Initial: This reminds me of my late grandparents. Their whole body language with each other... they are comfortable friends who have been thru it all together. Congrats to them!
Technical: Their natural closeness is depicted well here, however their straight on stance in the composition and the flat lighting leaves a snap shot feel to it. Not that it makes it terrible, .. snapshots are valuable. But if you had been able to do something to kick it up a knotch - like help to arrange their positions to each other, use a more solid background, or leave more space between them and the background to give less dof or focus on the background - then I feel it may have scored higher.
Overall, I love their expressions, and in the end you were right to just catch it.
So..there's the two sides of it :0)
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| 04/02/2003 12:27:14 PM |
Hand Someby RefocusedComment by MarkRob: I wonder aloud what this would look like if the background had color, and the hand was in silhoutte. Good shot - nice visual impact. The reflection on the right is a tad out of focus though. |
| 04/02/2003 02:03:53 AM |
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| 04/01/2003 11:12:11 PM |
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| 04/01/2003 11:10:51 AM |
Onby RefocusedComment by clues56: Nice clean sink! The shot is good, but it could be just a little more in focus. I wonder if you had used lighting on both sides if it would improve things. (Backlighting the spigotand eliminate the shadows) |
| 04/01/2003 10:39:32 AM |
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