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Challenge: Multi-Image Compositions (Classic Editing*)
Collection: patterns
Camera: Olympus E-20P
Location: Home
Date: Apr 24, 2003
Galleries: Digital Art, Diptych / Triptych
Date Uploaded: Apr 24, 2003

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05/08/2003 02:40:56 PM
*Critique Club*

FIRST IMPRESSION: Very nice colors - kind of reminds me of modelling clay in the patterns.

CHALLENGE: This submission is for a challenge requiring 2+ photographs, but I'm having difficulty determining what these photos are taken of (unless is really is clay). I see connectivity between the segments, but as for telling a story, it's difficult to tell.

COMPOSITION: Colors are good, clarity is good. The edges of the blue connection (segments 2/3) seem a little dirty. The layout of the three segments allows the eye to flow pretty easily from one to another.

TECHNICAL: Aside from the lighting/dirty blue issue I mentioned, I don't see any technical issues.

CONCLUSION: First off, some commentary would be very helpful in relaying your vision of this shot, or an explanation of what it is. This photograph shows some nice colors, along with a flow between segments, but I can't determine the story you're telling, or even what the photograph is.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges!
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/04/2003 01:16:10 PM
NIce graphics but what's the story?
04/30/2003 08:32:56 PM
Very colorful and holds my interest.
04/30/2003 06:21:17 PM
Wow...quite different. Attractive. What is it? The colors are marvelous!
04/29/2003 05:48:39 PM
Nice, simple but pleasing
04/28/2003 12:42:17 PM
Engaging and puzzling at the same time. Interesting abstract.


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