A Glass With Strawberries
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Comment by pncowley:
Composition is very nice... and I love your border! It accentuates the shot very nicely. Color and focus on the strawberries is absolutely perfect-- I feel as though I could reach out and eat one right now! --10.

A Glass With Strawberries
by Refocused

Comment by ChrisW123:
That strawberry with the white patch on it at the top is kind of distracting. The lighting and glass are nice.

A Glass With Strawberries
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Comment by emorgan49:
nice border - needs better strawberries -

A Glass With Strawberries
by Refocused

Comment by pinback:
Great composition. My only gripe is that the strawberries could look a little fresher/shinier. Their dullness takes the edge off the shot.

Baltimore Inner Harbor
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Comment by inspzil:
Great city scape. Wish the sky was bluer though. Water is remarkably calm and this is a really neat shot. Good luck

A Glass With Strawberries
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Comment by sotsot:
The blue colored glass had spoilted the entire image, if the glass is in transparent, the image should look better, with pure white and reddish combination.

A Glass With Strawberries
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Comment by David Ey:
10

Oblong
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Comment by mcrochip:
*Critique Club*

FIRST IMPRESSION: Very nice colors - kind of reminds me of modelling clay in the patterns.

CHALLENGE: This submission is for a challenge requiring 2+ photographs, but I'm having difficulty determining what these photos are taken of (unless is really is clay). I see connectivity between the segments, but as for telling a story, it's difficult to tell.

COMPOSITION: Colors are good, clarity is good. The edges of the blue connection (segments 2/3) seem a little dirty. The layout of the three segments allows the eye to flow pretty easily from one to another.

TECHNICAL: Aside from the lighting/dirty blue issue I mentioned, I don't see any technical issues.

CONCLUSION: First off, some commentary would be very helpful in relaying your vision of this shot, or an explanation of what it is. This photograph shows some nice colors, along with a flow between segments, but I can't determine the story you're telling, or even what the photograph is.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges!

Baltimore Inner Harbor
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Comment by HBunch:
As a photo, I think this is nice. As a post card though, I think that the sky is a little bland. especially the upper left. When we think of postcards, we think of the perfect world. Realizing you only had a week to get 'the perfect sky' and weather this time of year doesn't always cooperate, I understand, but think that for a postcard, it should have a more interesting sky. Also, the focus seems just a little soft. Nothing real serious, but I wonder if this could be just a bit sharper. ~Heather~

A Glass With Strawberries
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Comment by kiwiness:
You've made those stawberries look very delicious! Good setup, I like it, especially the angle you've chosen.