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| 05/23/2005 10:41:06 AM |
Distinctly Irisby glad2badadComment by glad2badad: Thanks Matthew/legalbeagle for taking the time for such an in-depth comment on this photo. VERY much appreciated!
I failed to mention I did use a ND grad (grey) filter to add some contrast to the sky... Message edited by author 2005-05-23 10:45:17. |
| 05/23/2005 09:21:54 AM |
Distinctly Irisby glad2badadComment by Matthew: I like this photo, but it is competing in a particularly strong field, and does not have the necessarty "wow" factor to avoid the middle ground. The middle ground for this challenge was a bit lower than usual, I think, because there are quite a lot of "wow" shots.
I would criticise the photo as follows. the gradation of colour in the background travels from yellow to blue, but the blue is not a strong blue: there is still a strong yellow cast. I might strengthen the blues in the top half of the image using colour balance controls, and possibly curves in certain channels.
The clouds are very subtle. I might have experimented with a polarising filter to punch out the whites in the cloud from the blue. As it is, the clouds are sufferring from the same yellow haze/colour cast.
Uniformity of the flowers is impressive - they are well matched and cast an interesting silhouette (if not immediately obvious as flowers). Drama might have been added if you could have caught a hihglight line tracing around the flowers to emphasise their shape and nature: possibly hard or impossible with this type of flower, but easier with flowers that have fluff on their leaves or petals (ie change of fauna being photographed - impractical to find different flowers on this timescale etc. I am sure, but availability/choice of subject will affect scoring dramatically). |
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| 05/23/2005 09:08:59 AM |
Distinctly Irisby glad2badadComment by glad2badad: Thanks David.
Originally posted by Pug-H: Well, I'm surprised that it didn't score higher. It's a silhouette for sure, with interesting negative space and nice gradation of colour in the sky. I gave it 7. |
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| 05/23/2005 09:02:32 AM |
Distinctly Irisby glad2badadComment by Pug-H: Well, I'm surprised that it didn't score higher. It's a silhouette for sure, with interesting negative space and nice gradation of colour in the sky. I gave it 7. |
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