Electric Meter
by kittenfc

Comment by kearock:
Good concept, but the words seem to be the subject, so more of them should be in focus.

rainy day
by kittenfc

Comment by austin2k:
Works for me.

zipper
by kittenfc

Comment by DefyTime:
::Critique Club::

First off I like what̢۪s going on here. I agree with Konador stating that this could have used a bit more contrast. I do think that a smaller aperture would have been better also, now as to how much. I don't know if you want to see all the way down due to the background might not be as appealing as you would want it, I don't know because I can't make it out. I think the zipper itself should be more in the frame, maybe not center but just not hanging off like that. I like your subject and your attempt.

rainy day
by kittenfc

Comment by sidpixel:
Brave attempt but I think the tonal range and subject are a bit lacking

rainy day
by kittenfc

Comment by KDO:
Very interesting point of view. I want to reach up and wipe the condensation off the glass or plastic. I like this a lot. It would be cool to see a bit more contrast, but that might give it a surreal look. Anyway, nice work. I commend your originality and ability to see the beauty in what many would overlook. Bravo!

rainy day
by kittenfc

Comment by nordicgirl:
Nice abstract but I would gave more contrast.

rainy day
by kittenfc

Comment by Gracious:
I like it.

rainy day
by kittenfc

Comment by speedylix:
Took me a while to figure this out...
These two black spots are a bit distracting, otherwise nice composition.

zipper
by kittenfc

Comment by Konador:
I think with a B&W photo you really need to boost the contrast a bit higher than this to give it more impact.

zipper
by kittenfc

Comment by moswyn:
Great macro, but a bit out of focus.