teenage graffiti
by Artan

Comment by 777STAN:
Nicely done!

Spirit of Life
by Artan

Comment by TonyUK:
I really like this........

Teasel
by Artan

Comment by Matthew:
Hi Ian

I like this shot. However, it looked slightly more impressive from the thumb than in full size: I think that at full size there are a couple of distracting details. I don't like the spiders web on the bottom left or the broken spines. I might try a touch more contrast. However, all said, I really like the pattern in the plant and you have framed it perfectly with the green and blue.

Spirit of Life
by Artan

Comment by Hawkeye:
Nice one. I had to look really hard at the flag and almost missed it. Well done. Top effort.

teenage graffiti
by Artan

Comment by Melethia:
A good idea for the challenge, and a nice bit of artwork. Only nit is that it appears to be finished artwork so the guy spray painting seems just a bit posed.

teenage graffiti
by Artan

Comment by Sanjuro:
Nice!

Spirit of Life
by Artan

Comment by LeeD:
Nice, it has a very 1970's photojournalistic feel to it.

Spirit of Life
by Artan

Comment by Beautiful-Joe:
Took me a while to see the face in the flag. Nicely done.

teenage graffiti
by Artan

Comment by whiteroom:
good one.

Drinking Pale Liquids
by Artan

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Nice focus and crisp colors. I do see some strange aberrations where the red and the blue meet up.

Lighting: Nice, even lighting. Your white background also works very well with this one.

Composition/Content: I also noticed the tilt, but I like that you chose to keep the waterline horizontal rather than the glass. It almost makes me want to see it tilted even more. I think that it would better fit the 'band' idea.

My Opinion: 5.6 is a pretty strong score for what you captured here. It serves better as a still life than something that makes me think album cover.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric