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05/21/2007 03:29:35 AM			 | 
		
		Hey there from the Critique Club
 
 Camera Work/Technical: Nice focus and crisp colors.  I do see some strange aberrations where the red and the blue meet up.
 
 Lighting: Nice, even lighting.  Your white background also works very well with this one.
 
 Composition/Content: I also noticed the tilt, but I like that you chose to keep the waterline horizontal rather than the glass.  It almost makes me want to see it tilted even more.  I think that it would better fit the 'band' idea.
 
 My Opinion: 5.6 is a pretty strong score for what you captured here.  It serves better as a still life than something that makes me think album cover.  
 
 Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
 Eric
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05/18/2007 02:09:42 PM			 | 
		
		| nice contrast but cant see this an album cover sorry |  
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05/17/2007 11:45:55 AM			 | 
		
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05/16/2007 03:53:40 PM			 | 
		
		| I like the feel of this, very clean shot, saturation is about right, good use of text. |  
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05/16/2007 03:23:36 PM			 | 
		
		| The distortion is interesting here.  The text slightly imbalances the presentation but I like the font used. |  
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05/15/2007 11:01:02 AM			 | 
		
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05/14/2007 09:11:27 PM			 | 
		
		| Cool colors, crisp and bright shot. |  
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05/14/2007 05:35:59 PM			 | 
		
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