The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background8,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by Ruben:
I like your concept, however, the light is uneven.

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by PTLParsons:
Not one of the "7". Get your idea, though. The apples alone would have done it.

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by Kathyc:
Effective composition. The bright light spot on the first apple seems distracting. Otherwise good.

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by las secret:
good picture i like the way the apples are in that row and what the girl represents

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by nards656:
But is it one of the seven? 5 nards656

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by MJOLLNIR:
huh?

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by Marsha:
Good idea. The reflection on the first apple is a little distracting. I would like it to be a bit sharper.

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by Natasha:
Great idea!!

The First Sin
by Richi

Comment by JeB:
Very nice shot. I love the symbolism that you've portrayed. It seems to maybe be a hair overexposed. This would be a very nice shot with a little work. Maybe less intensity from the light, so cause the backdrop to be even darker... to where the apples and Eve figure seemed to be just in a "void." It looks to be a tough lighting situation... - 6 - JB