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The First Sin
The First Sin
Richi


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Challenge: 7 Deadly Sins (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S30
Location: My Dinning Room
Date: Oct 13, 2002
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: Auto
Shutter: 1
Date Uploaded: Oct 13, 2002

For every sin the begining was the apple and the victim the Woman

Statistics
Place: 82 out of 150
Avg (all users): 5.0543
Avg (commenters): 6.4348
Avg (participants): 4.9000
Avg (non-participants): 5.1379
Views since voting: 1698
Votes: 313
Comments: 26
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10/21/2002 08:44:00 AM
The concept was nice... but my execution... lousy!!!! ;(
Anyway... thanks for the feedback you gave me this week...
I'll promise to do better this week!
This will go to my fans! ;)
There was no flash in the photo... it was a lamp actually, but i was too close to the object... i learn my lesson...
Eve was the "original sin" however she commited one of the seven sins wrath.
There are 7 apples... but 1 of the apples seems to be part of the others... take a close look!
Well once again... Thank you very much!
Richi
10/21/2002 01:06:00 AM
"ingas a veinte..."

Richie... Richie... otra oportunidad!, otra oportunidad!

: p
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/20/2002 04:13:00 PM
interesting concept ... and positioning of the apples ... 6-photosbyayme
10/20/2002 12:58:00 PM
I think focus and lighting don't match. Your focus is on the statue in the background but your lighting highlights the apples in the front. That's why I would like the photo better without the flash(?) light on the apples and more light on the statue. I also think one apple would be enough. More just distract too much. -stephan
10/19/2002 11:52:00 PM
Wow, i really like the way you put together the images...... first rate.
10/18/2002 09:44:00 PM
Interesting concept, the lighting and focus could be improved a little.
10/18/2002 08:48:00 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background8,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
10/17/2002 07:16:00 PM
I like your concept, however, the light is uneven.
10/16/2002 11:14:00 PM
Not one of the "7". Get your idea, though. The apples alone would have done it.
10/16/2002 08:11:00 PM
Effective composition. The bright light spot on the first apple seems distracting. Otherwise good.
10/16/2002 06:00:00 PM
good picture i like the way the apples are in that row and what the girl represents
10/15/2002 10:42:00 PM
But is it one of the seven? 5 nards656
10/15/2002 03:51:00 PM
huh?
10/15/2002 12:46:00 PM
Good idea. The reflection on the first apple is a little distracting. I would like it to be a bit sharper.
10/15/2002 08:01:00 AM
Great idea!!
10/14/2002 09:05:00 PM
Very nice shot. I love the symbolism that you've portrayed. It seems to maybe be a hair overexposed. This would be a very nice shot with a little work. Maybe less intensity from the light, so cause the backdrop to be even darker... to where the apples and Eve figure seemed to be just in a "void." It looks to be a tough lighting situation... - 6 - JB
10/14/2002 08:53:00 PM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7 , Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7 , Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5 , Total Averaged Rating 6 . smshats
10/14/2002 08:18:00 PM
great idea and good depth of field, too many apples or not enough, I don't know.
10/14/2002 07:16:00 PM
Original idea. Work went into it. A bit uninspirig to me, but I recognise the work. 7/10
10/14/2002 04:23:00 PM
Great idea, but it lacks a certain je ne sais quoi. I like the apples and the figure, but the focus seems off and the color/light range is somewhat muted. Also, the flash reflecting off the first apple is distracting.
10/14/2002 02:21:00 PM
Like the idea, the colors, eve statue doesnt makeclick to me! i would prefer a parra lief instead. wish you luck!!!
10/14/2002 10:27:00 AM
The depth is pretty good, but the glare coming off of the first apple is a little too bright.
10/14/2002 10:03:00 AM
You thought of the project at hand and used your creativity to produce a
stunning composition.
10/14/2002 09:14:00 AM
"Original sin" would of been a better title..
10/14/2002 04:39:00 AM
Creative idea. Focus it too soft for me and the light is hard. You score for being so creative. Nice. Justine.
10/14/2002 01:02:00 AM
Actually, original sin isn't part of the deadly sins, but i don't care for that :) i like the image alot, but i'd prefer if the model at end were a real woman to represent Eve. I like it, sort of. 9 paganini


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