Just One More Pint
by wkoffel

Comment by Shakey:
Nice to see some people have excellent tastes and good habits 7 from me

Good Luck and Cheers!

Just One More Pint
by wkoffel

Comment by thunderbug:
too much reflection in glass, though that is hard to fix and the lighting could be a little better

Just One More Pint
by wkoffel

Comment by Dusty:
I'll have one of those! Nice photo!

Fossilized
by wkoffel

Comment by wkoffel:
Thanks to everyone for your helpful feedback on my first DPC entry! I think I'm going to get addicted to this learning process. Glad to be here.

Two Fates
by wkoffel

Comment by wkoffel:
Looks like in this shot, I was a victim of using my ultra-bright Mac monitor, where the contrast worked well. I noticed on most machines, it does indeed look too dark. Alas. The photo should have been titled "heaven and hell" to show the dramatic point better. And yes, it is just one person, not two, as most people seemed to think. Thanks for the feedback. My worst score yet, and hopefully ever! :)

The Dawn Of Time
by wkoffel

Comment by melismatica:
It's dead center but the subject is dull.

Edited for clarity: Sorry, I was looking over your entries and I saw my rather blunt comment. I think my problem with this image had to do with the relevence of the watch and the dart board. I had originally meant to make a comment to this effect. I don't know why I came up with something so terse (perhaps I was feeling grumpy about my own entry which I regretted entering pretty immediately) From a strictly graphic view, this composition is interesting. It may have worked better if the dart board had been a bit more colorful. As it is there is very little interest in terms of color. The black provides the only real contrast. The texture provides some interest. I think my biggest issue is that there doesn't seem to be any reason to have the watch there except it happens to fit smack dab in the middle and looks kind of cool. Sometimes looking cool is good enough (that was what my '40' photo was all about). I think if this were much larger it would have more impact.

Message edited by author 2004-06-04 00:03:35.

Just One More Pint
by wkoffel

Comment by C-town driver:
Composition and clarity are great. Depth of field works nicely here.

Just One More Pint
by wkoffel

Comment by menardmam:
nice shot light and color a8

Just One More Pint
by wkoffel

Comment by j8xman:
Common solution. Good photograph/colors, composition.

Two Fates
by wkoffel

Comment by beckettboots:
Interesting photo - I like the silhouette around the right figure but I think the left one is a bit overexposed for this style.