A Center Piece
by Tikicharm

Comment by Olyuzi:
To my eye, there is not enough of seperation between main subject and background, creating some confusion even with the narrow DOF you've achieved. I think the problem lies in the lighting and common toning/coloring. I also find the lighting to be too bright on the main flowers...contrast is too high here and you have nearly blown out areas and very dark shadows. A little hard to look at.

Tall and Short
by Tikicharm

Comment by dahved:
Cool! I wish the horizontal line on the left was hidden, and the vertical dividing line was truly vertical. 7

A Center Piece
by Tikicharm

Comment by frychikn:
I like it

A Center Piece
by Tikicharm

Comment by L1:
Whites appear to be a bit blown out.

Tall and Short
by Tikicharm

Comment by paynekj:
A nice attempt, but I feel you could have rotated the image a bit to get the black/white edge vertical

Tall and Short
by Tikicharm

Comment by Count:
Cute photo, maybe a little to much contrast. Nice job though...

My Life in Ruins
by Tikicharm

Comment by Beagleboy:
That overly bright lightsource on the right is very distracting. The intensity of it seems to almost wash out the crispness of the runes on the stones. There also seems to be some sort of reflection on the bottom part of the background image with the swords and cross. Continue experimenting with your lighting technique to refine it.

My Life in Ruins
by Tikicharm

Comment by cghubbell:
Ruins, or runes? Seems like a bit of overexposure on the right washes out some detail. Nice composition.

Tall and Short
by Tikicharm

Comment by lindsay:
I think it would look a little cleaner if the white background were a little more uniformly white.. but I really like this, overall!

My Life in Ruins
by Tikicharm

Comment by fstopopen:
hilarious