A Throw Away Line
by Pangurban

Comment by MadMan2k:
I like the energy of this, but I would have cropped a lot off the top and the bottom since those parts aren't really adding anything. The horizon looks a bit crooked as well.

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by SaraR:
Yay! Top 10 finish, broken that magic 6 mark, and a PB!

Message edited by author 2014-10-17 02:47:27.

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by tvsometime:
What a catch of the shared thrill of childhood.

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by markwiley:
Great moment.

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by blindjustice:
great moment.

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by nygold:
Beautiful slice of life.

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by HCvE:
great shot

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by MadMan2k:
That looks like so much fun! I like the joy you've captured here. If I were to nitpick, I might like a little less of the grass in the foreground and a little more of the kite string.

Edge of A Broken Glass
by Pangurban

Comment by Jules1x:
*Greetings from the Critique Club*

Initial impressions - I like the image, the colors and lighting are very nice.

Compositionally - I like the strength of that broken edge, and it's placement in the shot is nice. However, there seemed to me to be a bit of something lacking in defining the subject since only that one edge is visible.

Technically I think this image is very good. Your edge is very sharp, and the lighting is quite dynamic and pleasing. I think the texture of the background and striations of light along the glass really added to your image.

Overall, excellent challenge submission. Congrats on the solid score and high finish.
Julee

Kite Capers
by Pangurban

Comment by tanguera:
Marvelous joy. The unseen kite is as much a part of this as the child's laugh.