Organic
by jenesis

Comment by GuGi:
I absolutely agree, gave it a 9 and was hoping it would do well. Better luck next time, you deserve it.

Bringin' the Heat
by jenesis

Comment by typologic:
Great capture.

Bringin' the Heat
by jenesis

Comment by Ecce_Signum:
I like what you've done here. I think the lighting is spot on as well as the depth of flame, I can see this being a dpc favourite. Its almost central but wonder if further away from central (either up or down) would help a touch? am thinking it will score well however :)

Bringin' the Heat
by jenesis

Comment by Makka:
Very well executed shot.

Preschool Days
by jenesis

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Teacher .. defiantely ... a little nervous in front of the camera .. lovely smile.

Composition:
Composition is ok ... having her to one side of the picture works well ... having the books and stuff around her creates the environment.

Subject:
meets the challenge .. and does so well.

Technical (Colour and light):
It is ok .. not fantastic .. but ok ... I like the colours .. as it is a class type setting they work.

To grow its vote?:
and like some of the others I would like to see the kids ... one of the other entries did this


and hit the top 5 ... is only one major difference between the pics .. and that is kids.

Summary:
Good job .. but as you seem to guess not your best ... keep shooting you got a great eye.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Preschool Days
by jenesis

Comment by Art Roflmao:
I think you did a great job on this! Only wish there were some rugrats running around in there. :)

The Troops Come Home!
by jenesis

Comment by Jacqueline:
Beautiful picture!!!

Low Maintenance
by jenesis

Comment by _eug:
WOW. Great look. Love the B&W tonality. Beautiful.

Low Maintenance
by jenesis

Comment by SJCarter:
I really like this Jen. The POV is unusual and very pleasing. Great expression & lighting. Of course the editing is top notch too (as usual). ;-)

Bringin' the Heat
by jenesis

Comment by s4nd3r99:
COOL!
Is this just a 90' rotated ball though ? :)