Mmm Mmm Good
by TommyMoe21

Comment by aj1621:
Great job! Everything is right on.

Mmm Mmm Good
by TommyMoe21

Comment by madcrabber:
very sharp, nice-8-

She Moves
by TommyMoe21

Comment by Sinky:
I love the emotion, and the whole spirit behind this.

Mmm Mmm Good
by TommyMoe21

Comment by jachang:
Great shot. Looks like I could reach out and touch him.

She Moves
by TommyMoe21

Comment by albc28:
The location of the motion blur distract from the photo.

She Moves
by TommyMoe21

Comment by dr rick:
The composition doesn't work well; her arm divides the photo in two. Above is the model's face, which is great. Below is her dress, which is blurred and distracting. And the violin, which should be a focal point, is in the corner where it is ignored. Too bad you couldn't climb a ladder to take this shot!

She Moves
by TommyMoe21

Comment by cloudsme:
Good portrait.

She Moves
by TommyMoe21

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
too much blur for me even if intentional. and seems like the background is quite noisy. hth 5

The Lost Maiden Of The Campgrounds
by TommyMoe21

Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review:

It took a bit to see this one. The exposure of the campers is good. The lost maiden however, is competing with the rest of the picture, or it could be said the rest is competing with her. The movment here does a little harm as I initially took the arms of the maiden as flame or smoke. While trying to figure out what it is, the eye keeps getting pulled away by the light at the door to the RV.

Had this been done round a campfire, or other area that more complimented the maiden, it might have been more effective.

She Moves
by TommyMoe21

Comment by twm122:
Nice candid action shot. Love the emotion on her face. She appears to be really in the moment.