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The Lost Maiden Of The Campgrounds
The Lost Maiden Of The Campgrounds
TommyMoe21


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Magic & Mystery (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-4.5 USM
Location: Camping
Date: Aug 18, 2006
Aperture: f4.5
ISO: 400
Shutter: 2.5 seconds
Galleries: Abstract, Emotive
Date Uploaded: Aug 20, 2006

 Shot RAW. WB, and exposure adjusted in RSE6 then converted. Cropped, resized, some minor cloning, slight blurring, USM & SFW in PSCS.

Statistics
Place: 115 out of 127
Avg (all users): 4.5619
Avg (commenters): 4.7500
Avg (participants): 4.0727
Avg (non-participants): 4.7355
Views since voting: 745
Views during voting: 336
Votes: 210
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 09/02/2006 03:19:12 PM
Critique Club Review:

It took a bit to see this one. The exposure of the campers is good. The lost maiden however, is competing with the rest of the picture, or it could be said the rest is competing with her. The movment here does a little harm as I initially took the arms of the maiden as flame or smoke. While trying to figure out what it is, the eye keeps getting pulled away by the light at the door to the RV.

Had this been done round a campfire, or other area that more complimented the maiden, it might have been more effective.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/24/2006 12:45:28 PM
The lighting is especially creepy here. I love how unusual this is.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/23/2006 11:48:01 PM
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However, this composition doesn't hold my attention. I looked right at the people in the middle of the photo first, and then seeing nothing especially interesting or relevant to magic or mystery, I wandered around until I noticed the face in the lower left.

Maybe if you'd blurred out the people in the middle a bit, and cropped the right third off, it would've driven my eye more to the "lost maiden." 4.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/22/2006 06:39:55 PM
I give you credit for the idea, but not for the execution. If you could, I'd somehow link the ghost with the people in the back (by their actions or expression). Here it just looks like the people in the back are random and not part of the composition. 4
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/21/2006 11:27:26 AM
seems a bit noisy and very cluttered ... not easy to find a primary focus
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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