On the River Niger
by tryals15

Comment by rblanton:
I really like this shot.The colors, the river, the people and the composition all are well done.

The Temperance of Two Instances
by tryals15

Comment by Structor:
Beautiful picture.

The Temperance of Two Instances
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Comment by gliphix:
nice picture

The Temperance of Two Instances
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Comment by pjangel:
Nice combination of motion and sharpness. Nice color saturation.

The Temperance of Two Instances
by tryals15

Comment by cryan:
very cool

The Temperance of Two Instances
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Comment by igoofry:
Nice capture.

Isn't Spain Great? =]
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Comment by Jutilda:
Man, gotta love that killer sky!!!!

Things that go BUMP in the night...
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Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
I thought it was interesting - I assumedd as shown in my voting comment that it was peanut butter, and I thought you had to be brave or stupid - with that amount of peanut butter on you!

Composition:

This is fine, not what I would call attractive with the eyes forced wide open and retouched- though your comments I am unsure why you felt the need for this.

Subject:
Pick two .. you got it ... but that people had to guess peanut butter may have been the issue with the scoring.

Technical (Colour and light):
I really feel (personally) that this is a total black and white overkill ... that is only my opinion - lighting is fine.

To grow its vote?:
As said ... add some colour so that people can see what you are doing - but I sharn't harp on :)

Summary:
Good picture - met the challenge - keep on shooting!

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

The Temperance of Two Instances
by tryals15

Comment by electina:
very nice water movement, not too much, not too little...

The Temperance of Two Instances
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Comment by chinpaca:
Oooooohhhh........