Where the rays of the sun were so warm and tender
by expatdawn

Comment by Lydia:
Oh golly! This is FABULOUSLY SIMPLE and so complex! I love it. (not voting)

Dinner Disassembled
by expatdawn

Comment by Tacoma28:
I feel the background is too sharp and detracting from the egg which should be the focal point

Dinner Disassembled
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Comment by ph1:
liked the idea; needs better illumination and focus

Dinner Disassembled
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Comment by aliqui:
Overall a pretty yellow shot.

Seattle at Night
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Comment by CodKing:
Very nice

Dinner Disassembled
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Comment by jamesgoss:
The first thing I noticed in this is how strongly colored the light source is. I think this could use a little more white balance, even if you do still want to keep it warm toned. The DOF for me is a bit strange, it kind of took me a while to find the area of the photograph that's in focus. I kept expecting it to be the egg on the left. With that said, I think if you positioned some things farther back to accentuate the Yolk it would be helpful. (this would be in reference to the egg crate, mustard and mayo). In this regard, everything seems to be in the same plane of vision, almost a horizontal line, and that also seems to assist in making the hierarchy a little difficult to establish.

Dinner Disassembled
by expatdawn

Comment by Salteh:
Nice idea, but it looks a bit too yellow to me.

Seattle at Night
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Comment by bohemka:
I love Seattle and I do like this angle, but it's missing a lot. First, it needs to be bigger.

Seattle at Night
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Comment by JonoTucker:
would have liked to see this in color

Seattle at Night
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Comment by Dphoto:
Nice contrast. Good luck