Generations Past
by vonnie1956

Comment:
There is no real reason for the coin and key in this collection, other than they are a bit old.

Reflecting On Faith Lost
by jmattys

Comment:
Not a comment directed at you in particular, but the weak puns are starting to grate, oh well on to the next, no doubt it'll be money going down a plughole, or something about bulls.

Oh, and the picture looks a bit 'squinty'. Maybe a polaroid filter would get rid if the brightness, and help penetrate the NASDAQ sign. Maybe a vertical frame and stepping to the left a bit would help isolate the active elements in the picture (The sign and the relected church) from the other bits, like the the traffic and the other buildings.

Starbucks
by chariot

Comment:
A vertical format would emphasise the giantness of the cup (and thus starbucks) as well as cut out the green chair in the bottom left. You need to decide if you want the straw in or out of the cup as it leads the eye out of the picture.

A litle lunchbreak at work,made by christian 12 years
by Christian-12-Years

Comment:
Indoor photography with a flash always causes the background to be too dark. Try getting someone to hold up some silver foil or white card, its a cheap version of those reflective brollies the pros use. Nice subject, I like the humour.

Foreign Flag
by cthenk

Comment:
Needs to make more of the 'made in' label, perhaps by ironing it flat, and using a diagonal framing, cropping about 1/3 of the flag.

Laid off.
by myqyl

Comment:
Its a good subject, but needs some added elements to drive things home. Perhaps the red hands could have an 'I love you daddy' in childs writing. Maybe replace the small framed pictures with a family portrait at A4 size just to make it clear that there is a family in trouble out there today. You could add an unfinised todo list. The framed circuit board needs to be a part of the bit and peices of the life thats ended rather than the focus. A newspaper with awful headlines could help too. Try a vertical frame to eliminate the cubicle door and show the other empty cubicles. I like the missing PC. Im afraid this looks a bit rushed in some ways. Erm, was someone standing over you whilst you did this? I get the feeling this may have been a real sacking.

Got Money?
by Meggie

Comment:
Needs to be level, and needs everything in focus. Go back and try again, but this time stand the camera on a couple of books, and use a longer exposure.

untitled
by darylbrown

Comment:
A pretty average shot of a building, ruined by traffic lights intruding into the frame. You need to find and angle where they dont intrude, or an angle where they become a proper part of the picture, maybe via a long exposure at dusk, or underlining the carved words.

breaking the glass ceiling
by mac

Comment:
Turn the flash off when there is a wall directly behind, as the shadow becomes a narrow band around the subject.

something has come over us
by heartsdivide

Comment:
Its a really good pic, but I dont see what its got to say on the theme.