Leading troop of clones
by paha_l

Comment:
Hello Pavel from the Critique Club,

Composition
There is no single point of interest - the six water drops are the main theme and they seem to be randomly placed. The wood grain background running at a diagonal is probably the best choice. Somehow the balance is not quite right for me - maybe if the drops were placed in a defined pattern,(circle, square, diamond?) it would make more sense.

Focus
You have used a fairly shallow depth of field, which is good for drawing attention to a particular item or area but there does not seem to be a reason for it. Maybe a deeper depth of field (smaller aperture=higher f number), bringing all the drops into focus might improve the image.

Exposure
The expoure looks just about right, any more and the highlights which are already blown out would become intrusive, any less and the image would be too dark.

Challenge
Does it fit the challenge? Maybe in the context of capturing a macro of water drops, which is unusual but maybe not quite extraodinary.

Overall
Sorry but the image doesn't seem to have any purpose. If your intention was an abstract, then perhaps it needs more interest. If your intention was to stretch your photography - great! Keep shooting.

Hugh
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No Ordinary Man.
by knklove

Comment:
Hello Kreg from the Critique Club,

Composition
The statue is clearly your primary subject and I like the way the branches on the left and the trees on the right provide a frame. The camera position means the wall is sloping away form the viewer and this provides some interesting diagonal lines. Maybe the window behind the statue is a bit distracting but I'm not sure what you could have done about that. Maybe I would have cropped a little less on the bottom, to retain the whole of the plinth or at least the first step.

Focus
The statue itself is in focus - there is deep depth of field which is fine, although a wider aperture with consequently less depth of field might have softened the background to some advantage.

Exposure
Capturing white subjects in a generally dark background is always difficult. You have overexposed some of the statue, losing some highlight detail, which is a pity but had you reduced the light by smaller aperture or shorter exposure you would have lost details in the shadows. Maybe the statue was more important?

Challenge
This was a good subject for the challenge for those with the appropriate religious understanding (and convictions).

Overall
The religious theme will spark an interest from some of your audience - others may react against it. It is a very reasonable capture of the statue. Wander around some more and take your camera with you!

Hugh
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amazing, unbelievable...extraordinary !
by dknaeps

Comment:
Hello Dirk from the Critique Club,

Composition
Wall as a backdrop to sandalled feet propped up providing the main subject. Hmm, the off centre positioning adds a bit of interest and the legs provide depth but maybe this is an occasion where symmetry might have been beneficial.

Focus
The depth of field is good, right from the knees to the wall.

Exposure
Full range from black to white, with some detail in the shadows and only a little loss of detail in the highlights. Shot fast enough to freeze any camera movement, giving a solid image. Probably best in B & W.

Challenge
Maybe your intentions were a little too subtle for your audience - the "extraordinary" was clearly in your mind but you failed to convey it to most of your audience.

Overall
I'm not sure what this was about - completing the photographer's comments box would help the critiquer! Not really my cup of tea but keep submitting, your B& W style shown here would benefit a more striking subject.

Hugh
(Username hughletheren)
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Weekend Freedom
by DefyTime

Comment:
Nice location but a little oversharpened for me.

Callaway HX is for driving, Nike is for practice
by MyD2

Comment:
Neat idea but the highlights appear cilipped, taking out the detail of the balls.

Best Product
by graphicfunk

Comment:
This is the best idea I have seen so far and the bottle itself is beautifully crisp - pity about the background, which is too busy for me.

Spreading Paint on the Bread and Butter
by gerdagrice

Comment:
You have to be in the right place at the right time - and realise it! Well done, love it.

Angel
by heida

Comment:
Great impact - maybe a tighter crop would enhance without losing drama?

In My Dreams
by wickedpete

Comment:
Great idea, makes a pleasing composition, lots of angles, arms/legs/body/canes, pity the face and headscarf has such strong lighting, losing some detail

June
by jjbeguin

Comment:
Very attractive and serene - love the grasses and the dash of blue.