Abandoned
by hokie

Comment:
Interesting juxtaposition of elements. I like the focus here. karmat

Another Year Older
by Corey

Comment:
A couple of suggestions that I think would help this picture (though its focus and lighting are right on, I believe): Focus only on the cake or only on the one guy (maybe by moving to the left a little). I think the major distraction is the guy on the far left, though I do think his facial expression is humorous. karmat

Antiquated Arrangement
by Gene L.

Comment:
Good composition, and the lighting works well here. karmat

Seventh Street Grille
by mcrochip

Comment:
I think the sign, since that seems to be what you are focusing on, should be more important in the picture. Also, I think cropping the right side windows would help. I like the way the bushes/tress lead the eyes to the building. karmat

2nd/3rd century AD
by stephan

Comment:
I think this picture needs more light to truly emphasize the features. I like the general composition. karmat

Beyond Repair
by FranziskaLang

Comment:
I like the dramatic angles and the contrasting colors. good work. karmat

EncRust
by willsy66

Comment:
Shallow depth of field works well here, I think, though it may be more effective if it were possible to view the "context" of this picture. karmat

KEEPER OF DREAMS
by karol

Comment:
I think cropping it a touch tighter at the bottom to eliminate the red/pink stripe would have improved this picture. It's got great focus, and I like the water drops. I also like the contrast between the background colors. karmat

crumbling beauty
by awmk1981

Comment:
I think backing up and getting more context would help give this picture more depth and meaning, especially at the top. I like the colors. karmat

I'm a little rusty
by aripps

Comment:
That is a bright red, there. I think if you had moved jsut a touch to the left, then the yellowish color could play in the picture a little more. It kinda looks like he just walked in the door. karmat