Red, White & Blue
by mullany1957

Comment:
The blue sky on this is really nice. I think if you could have shown more detail on the tower by getting closer (though i realize it may not have been possible) would have made it more powerful. karmat

shopper
by grahamgorman

Comment:
I love the colors here, but I think the negative space would have been more obvious and effective if you had cropped the foreground and right out, leaving sky, eave, and shopper. karmat

Who's space is it anyway?
by johnmk

Comment:
i like the way the wake of the boat draws the eyes upwards and to the left. karmat

Twin Palm trees
by victor01

Comment:
I don't know if it is possible, but if the trees were further to the right, leaving more open space on the left, it might seem even more open. karmat

Negative/Positive
by mcrael

Comment:
I like the contrast here, and the focus on the outside of the door is good, too. karmat

Bring a Pen and Paper
by zadore

Comment:
This is a neat effect, and works well with the white background of dpc, but i think the pen needs to be a little sharper (just my personal taste). I think the pen sharply focused with high contrast would have a neat effect. karmat

on fire
by ritaard

Comment:
I love the blue on the left. If only the upper right window had been as warm and orange as the others. (Next time, go knock on their door, and tell them to change their lights! just kidding) karmat

Splitting Up
by razwan

Comment:
Looks like your picture is breaking in two. neat work. karmat

flower
by whobee

Comment:
Nice capture of detail, and i like the simplicity of the colors. Two suggestions, though, that in my opinion, would make it a little stronger, mayber. First, move the flower over just a touch so tha tyou can't see the black between the petals in the middle. Okay, one suggestion, cause then i think that might eliminate cropping the petals out on the right. karmat

The Smithfield Street Bridge
by alanfreed

Comment:
I like this city scape and teh warmth it seems to have. The red foreground is interesting. Did you mean to do that? If so how, and why? I don't think it is necessarily bad, just interesting. karmat