The Pastor is HOT
by hotpasta

Comment:
i like the processing of this -- very edgy feeling

The Look
by dixonp1

Comment:
This wasn't basic, it was advanced.

Are geese puzzling in nature? Join the dots....
by keegan1

Comment:
I looks like a person flexing their muscle to me! The elbow is the point furthest to the left.

November
by tnun

Comment:
is that a dead bird in the lower right?

Running
by aliqui

Comment:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, I like that this is not centered, and that you have not "cut off" any of the drain (though that can work sometimes). However, it seems to be a bit unbalanced, still. I'm thinking if there were more negative space to the right and top *might* make it feel more balanced.

Technically, generally speaking, the exposure, focus, etc is very well done. Also, you have done well in teh bw conversion. I think what might detract a bit is the top of the splash is not as sharp as the rest, or as distinct from rest of the sink. In shots like this, it seems that people look around the rim of the water drop more than the base. If the "rim" isn't well focused, it takes away from the shot a bit.

Overall, a good shot, and I can see the connection to the original.

Best to you in future challenges.
Karma

A Love Remembered
by luvmyaussie

Comment:
I really like how these two work togehter.

Sea and Sky
by Germaine

Comment:
I like this one because from the thumb, it looks like one shot! Great way to make the shots work together.

Feb 15 - Chocolate in red
by hajeka

Comment:
Nice job! I like hte show of progression

Valentine
by Jutilda

Comment:
THis is awesome. I really like the edgy contrasty look of this one.

Arrested Development
by Jutilda

Comment:
One of those pieces that makes youlook at it and study for a while.